Animation Motion Design: Story Board,original, made changes

We all worked togrther as a team to plan out a story board. We made a really quick draft story board first in case we wanted to add/change things and then decided on the finished piece.

I drew out the proper, more detailed draft of the story board. I now have it properly stuck onto a sheet with directions. We made lots of changes so we could finish it in time!
Here is the storyboard:

Shot 1

Opening. Miramax Production fades in and ut of a black screen

Shot 2

Almost like a written introduction "Somewhere in Las Angeles ...." fades in and out of a black screen

cut this shot out!

Shot 3

Two main characters are walking down the street

Shot 4

Suddenly stop to shoot at something. Credits from the shooting.

Cut! Insteaad the credits will come out as they walk past

Shot 5

Continue walking to the Jack Rabbit Slims diner

Shot 6

They find another main character and start dancing

We also changed this scene slightly, Animating the dance took too long so instead the two characters stand on stage with their trophy

Shot 7

Uma Thurman in the bathroom, bends over to snort cocaine. Her name appears behind her and she lifts her head again. Passes out. Screan turns black.

Cut!!

~~Strange basement scene. Willis and Marcellus tied up~~

We decided to repace these three shots

with a simpler less revealing (and odd) one

Shot 8 - Bruce Willis sitting in the bar and

our two main characters walk behind him

~~Rotates to view the Gimp...weird!~~

~~Rotates again to view the untied and armed willis and Marcellus. Marcellus appears from behind Willis, also the credits appears with him. Marcellus shoots, screen turns red.~~

Shot 9